Term 1 2014 Written Language

WALT write a timed recount about a time when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
·      when and where you did something special
·      who was with you
·      what you did (think about the order you did things)
·      how you felt and why you felt this way.

By Teri Johnston
At the Movies

I went to the movies with my family. I could hear and smell the delicious popping popcorn and fizzy drink. We got our seats and finished the movie. Then we went to the shop to get me a toy because I was good. It was great.

Next steps
Your title was At the Movies but you did not mention its name or what it was about. Some more details would have helped.

Why was it great?

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