WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
·
when and where you did something special
·
who was with you
·
what you did (think about the order you did things)
·
how you felt and why you felt this way.
By Teri Johnston
At the Movies
I went to the
movies with my family. I could hear and smell the delicious popping popcorn and
fizzy drink. We got our seats and finished the movie. Then we went to the shop
to get me a toy because I was good. It was great.
Next
steps
Your title was At the Movies but you did
not mention its name or what it was about. Some more details would have helped.
Why was it great?
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