We are learning to:
. give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts
. correctly place full stops and capital letters
· In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives
. In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop
Teri you have included several interesting adjectives. You have given people's names in your recount capital letters. Great writing.
To finish off your writing with more detail. For example "I had fun because......"